The Odd Couple- B/J drabble

[guavejuice]

Author:guavejuice
Pairing:Brian/Justin
Timeline: 10 years Post 513
Other characters:Gus
A/N:Originally written for drabbles challenge 31 @EKG_club



Disclaimer:I own nothing but this story.
Comments are love.

"Why are you still wearing that shirt?"

"Why is it even bothering you?"

"Maybe because we just bought the entire Prada fall collection? You can wear anything you like… with that body,"

"Cut it out, Brian!"

"Why? Can't I admire your boyish figure anymore? Even though I will admit you've grown quite a bit young man, "

"Okay fine, but If I take off that shirt YOU have to promise me you'd take off that cap. It's hideous. You know I can't stand it,"

"Look at you being all bossy, well if you really wanna know I'm not sure I like your scruffy look but you don't hear me queening about it…"

"Oh no… don't go there Mister. Don't you talk about facial hair…"

"I haven't heard any complaints from you so far,"

"That's because…"

"Go on, what's on your mind ? But make it quick because I'm really horny,"

"Don't think you can sweet talk me while you stroke my dick like that, Kinney!"

"Ha! You KNOW I'm irresistible…"

"Fuck it! look at us... we're like an old married couple,"

"Isn't that what you always wanted Sunshine?"

"Do you really need an answer? Well Yeeess... but wait, shouldn't we go upstairs?""

"I.Can't…"

"Okaaay, Okayy, lemme just...God, Briaaan, right there,"

"Ohhh fuck,… guuuu… Juss, "

_ _ _ _


"Ewww...You guys... "

"GUS! What the f… What are you doing here?"

"I can't look, put your cloths on! I told you I was on my way over here to spend time with you and Justin by the pool, the stable and the Tennis courts before summer is over and High school starts next week remember? "

"You might have mentioned something, I've been a little busy you know…"

"I can see that dad,"

"Careful Sonny boy…"

Comments

[cyclotomic-72.livejournal.com]

I like this snap shot of Justin and Brian life. You did a good job explaining the photo, particularly challenging as Gale looks very un-Brian-like.

One thing I have often wondered is why Brian never seems to have learned to lock the door. I suspect he likes people to know how much sex he is having. Even so, he really should ask who it is before he answers the door naked. You never know when it could unexpectedly be one of his parents.

[guavejuice.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and leave such a thoughtful supportive feedback. It means a lot to me and I'm thrilled to know you enjoyed it. Gale def looks un-Brian-like in this particular pic but that's what sparked my inspiration actually.
Plus I do agree that Brian had a 'thing' with un-locked doors which is always great to explore even in post 513 fiction.

[908718.livejournal.com]

Gus showing up was hilarious. Great short story.

[guavejuice.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment. Your supportive feedback means a lot to me. This drabble was so much fun to write. So pleased to know you enjoyed it :)

[kellankyle.livejournal.com]

This was perfect! I kept scrolling up to the photo and I just noticed they were wearing the same shirt in different colors. Both were pretty hideous. And Gale is such a mess. His collar is all wrinkled. God, I love him!!

This was absolutely wonderful, V. 💖

P.S. I did get your PM, and will answer it soon. :)

[guavejuice.livejournal.com]

Aww... thank you SO much for taking the time to read and comment my dear Deborah. Your supportive encouraging feedback means so much to me. I totally noticed the shirt thing and that was actually my initial inspiration to write as a Post 513 B/J fic with a 'twist' ;)
So glad to know you got my PM :)

[camjakefan.livejournal.com]

I don't comment often but I love your work.. Especially the little snapshots of B/J's life together.

[guavejuice.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment. It means a lot to me to know you enjoy my work. This was really fun to write :)

[bksbracelet.livejournal.com]

Very funny love the sarcasm from both of them

[guavejuice.livejournal.com]

Thank you SO much for taking the time to read and comment Chris. I'm so glad to 'see' you here. Your supportive lovely feedback means a lot to me. This was so much fun to write, so pleased to know you enjoyed it :)

[yumyumpm.livejournal.com]

Love this. Gus seems to have a hard time with catching his fathers having fun.

[guavejuice.livejournal.com]

Thank you SO much for taking the time to read and comment. So nice to have you here :) Your supportive feedback means a lot to me. This was so much fun to write, so thrilled to know you enjoyed it :)