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Author:[livejournal.com profile] guavejuice
Pairing:Brian/Justin
Beta:Kim [livejournal.com profile] predec2 Can't thank you enough!!
Other characters:Debbie, Emmett,Lindsay, Mel, Gardner Vance, Gus (mentioned.)
A/N:This is not a WIP. I'll be updating regularly.
Click here for previous chapters.
Disclaimer:I own nothing but this story.
Comments are love.

Part 3



"Justin, honey, where are you?" A low, coarse woman's voice suddenly breaks the dense silence of the spacious studio.

"In here, Debbie," Justin answers, sounding like a drowning man.

"I told you I'd be here as soon as I can." Debbie, a redheaded woman in her mid-70's and dressed in a colorful kaftan, says. Her bangles and earrings rattle as she speaks.

"Hello, Baby." She greets Emmett and kisses him on the cheek. "We have to figure out a way to help our Sunshine, don't we?" she continues.

"You're my art agent, not my mother," Justin protests.

"That, too." She lifts a finger, pointing a sharp red fingernail at him.

"Wait… " Emmett inquires, looking sideways at Debbie " Did you tell Justin about the whole thing?".

"I may have said something, yes," Debbie admits. "But the kid needed to know, so I told him straight up. No pun intended." She grabs her bag to search for her cigarettes. "Well, I'm not the one who fucked that floozy; Brian did."

"Debbie, please…" Justin beseeches quietly.

"What?" Debbie takes a drag of her cigarette. "I always told you there's going to be trouble with this guy from the first time I saw him, when he came to your fourth art show."


"He was busy," Justin maintains, still trying for some inexplicable reason to defend him.

"Oh, please… too busy to attend his partner's first ever major art show in New York City? Come on, that is totally fucked." Debbie puffs circles of smoke as she speaks.

"You said he was handsome," Justin points out.

"I also told you he would break your heart and you didn't listen." Debbie's voice softens.

"He was the one who encouraged me to come here," Justin reminds her.

"Well, you know what they say… when the cat's out of the way the mice are out to play or whatever," Debbie quips.

"You're saying he supported the idea of me moving here so that he would continue to fuck around?" Justin says, all teary eyed. "But we agreed on that! Plus he kept the rings. We got engaged! Fuck! " The blond lifts himself off the floor and runs out of the room.

"Happy now?" Emmett hisses towards Debbie.

"Never been more outraged in my life if you must know," Debbie responds sadly in a stone cold voice. "But Justin needs to wake up once and for all and realize this needs to stop. This time the bastard took it too far."

TBC…

Date: 2013-11-04 03:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] techgirl-on-ij.livejournal.com
Oh, I feel so bad for Justin. And for Brian, too. He'd never hurt Justin like this on purpose.

Thanks for updating :)

*hugs*

Date: 2013-11-04 03:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] guavejuice.livejournal.com
Hey, you're fast! ;)

There's quite a bit of hurt and angst here, I agree but don't worry, I would never let Brian do anything too OOC ;)
Thank you so much for your sweet supportive feedback my dear techi.
Now I'm off to read your update ;)
*hugs you tight*

Date: 2013-11-04 05:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emac66.livejournal.com
OG....I almost can't watch. Heart breaks for Justin. Brian is obviously being manipulated or lied to. These short chapters are killing me!! lol. Love it. Can't wait for more.

Date: 2013-11-04 05:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] guavejuice.livejournal.com
Sorry 'bout it ;)
I promise you'll get to hear Brian's side of the story soon enough, not just from Brian ;)
Thank you so much for your supportive kind feedback. I really appreciate it :)

Date: 2013-11-04 05:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yumyumpm.livejournal.com
Nice to see where Deb fits in, but I really can't wait to read Brian's side of the story.

Date: 2013-11-04 05:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] guavejuice.livejournal.com
Deb always fits in, doesn't she? ;)
I promise you'll get to know Brian's side of the story soon enough, even if it won't be Brian telling it at first ;)
Thank you so much for your kind supportive comment. I really appreciate it :)

Date: 2013-11-04 06:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lrknow.livejournal.com
Poor Justin, Brian is really crossing the line or is he?? Can't wait to find out...loved the Emmet- Debbie - Justin dynamic....
Hope you dont keep us waiting for too long: )
Hugs, Kimi

Date: 2013-11-04 07:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] guavejuice.livejournal.com
Brian is kinda crossing the line but he won't do anything too OOC, I promise ;) Deb and Emmett work well together indeed.
Thank you so much for your supportive feedback. I really appreciate it. More to come soon :)
Edited Date: 2013-11-04 07:16 pm (UTC)

Date: 2013-11-04 07:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] urugwaj.livejournal.com
They ALL have to say something about Brian. But I want to know what he has to say about all this mess. Poor Justin :(

Date: 2013-11-04 08:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] guavejuice.livejournal.com
You will find out soon enough ;)
Thank you so much for your kind supportive feedback my dear.
*hugs*

Date: 2013-11-04 08:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shadownyc.livejournal.com
Another excellent chapter!

Date: 2013-11-04 08:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] guavejuice.livejournal.com
awww thank you so much for your super encouraging feedback and for your ongoing support my dear Car. It means a lot to me.
*hugs you tight*

Date: 2013-11-04 09:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] weenlau.livejournal.com
Oh, Debbie. It's good to "see" her. You really know how to keep us interested. :)

Date: 2013-11-05 05:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] guavejuice.livejournal.com
Thanks you so much for your supportive feedback, Laura. I really appreciate it. I'm so glad you're enjoying this story :)
*hugs*

Date: 2013-11-05 03:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] koalared.livejournal.com
I think I may actually like Deb and Em in these roles more than the QAF roles. Great chapter.

Date: 2013-11-05 05:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] guavejuice.livejournal.com
I'm so glad to know you're enjoying this! Thank you so much for your supportive feedback. I really appreciate it :)

Date: 2013-11-05 04:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] later2nite.livejournal.com
I can't wait to hear what Brian says about all this. Very interesting chapter! ♥

Date: 2013-11-05 05:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] guavejuice.livejournal.com
Mr. Kinney Definitely has some explaining to do ;)
Thank you so much for your kind supportive feedback my dear Linda. It means a lot to me :)
More to come soon!
*hugs*
Edited Date: 2013-11-05 05:17 am (UTC)

Date: 2013-11-06 12:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spike7451.livejournal.com
Love your Debbie in this story. :)

Poor Justin..... Brian better have a really good explanation of what is going on. Does a Debbie and smacks Brian up the side of the head. Grrrr!

Date: 2013-11-06 02:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] guavejuice.livejournal.com
Does a Debbie and smacks Brian up the side of the head

Yup, sometimes BK needs a smack on the head Debbie style ;)
Thank you so much for your sweet supportive feedback my dear Lyn. It means a lot to me :)
And btw- Part 4 is already up. I posted it earlier today in case you're interested ;)
*hugs*

Date: 2013-11-10 11:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bubbafrogz.livejournal.com
Interesting, a trouble making Debbie?

Date: 2013-11-11 01:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] guavejuice.livejournal.com
mmm... I guess she just wanted to inform Justin ;)
Thank you so much for your lovely feedback. I really appreciate it :)

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