Breath- B/J drabble

[guavejuice]

Author:guavejuice
Pairing:Brian/Justin
Timeline:S4
Beta:mander3_swish thank you so much, darling!!
Word count:100
Justin's POV
Written for prompt #220B @Drabylon
The prompt:

I own nothing.
Comments are love.

You look so exhausted. You were barely able to take off your pants earlier and you didn't object when I reached out to help you.

You close your eyes and let out a quite sigh, then hold your breath as I help you lie down in bed.

I caress your face, asking you to tell me about Ibiza. You try to speak. I can't really hear you, but it doesn't matter because I already know.

I lean my head on your chest, tears burning my eyes.

If you could only breath so I could breath you in… hold you in.

Comments

[later2nite.livejournal.com]

This is a brilliant use of the prompt, V. Very moving and emotional.

I love this scene in the show so much. It's a rare moment when Brian lets Justin love him without protesting.

Great drabble!

hugs ♥

[guavejuice.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much for your supportive feedback, Linda.
It means a lot to know you think so.
*hugs back*

[galenut.livejournal.com]

Very touching.

[guavejuice.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much for your feedback.

[yvonnereid.livejournal.com]

Thats really beautiful,I love it! ~ Vonnie xx

[guavejuice.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much for your feedback, Vonnie. I'm pleased to know you think so :)

[biu07.livejournal.com]

This is one of my favourite scenes. I always weep when I (re)watch it. Thanks for writing and sharing. :)

[guavejuice.livejournal.com]

It's such an intense scene :(
Thank you for your feedback.

[rulisteningbj.livejournal.com]

Oh my how beautiful. Justin's love for Brian.

Dee Dee

[guavejuice.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much for your lovely feedback, Dee Dee.

[landlady-4rent.livejournal.com]

So very beautiful, Vered! One of my favorite scenes. Always brings tears to my eyes. Lovely! Annie

[guavejuice.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much for your honest feedback :)

[techgirl-on-ij.livejournal.com]

So very beautiful drabble!

[guavejuice.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much for your feedback, tech. I really appreciate it :)

[rk1981.livejournal.com]

This is one of the most emotional scenes in the series for me, and this drabble nails it. It gave me a lump in my throat - great work!

[guavejuice.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much for your honest and kind feedback :)

[spike7451.livejournal.com]

Very beautiful. ♥

[guavejuice.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment, Lyn. I really appteciate it :)
*hugs*

[sunshine-kinney.livejournal.com]

One of my favourite scenes and one of my favourite songs...beautifully written and I will think of this drabble next time I listen! :)

[guavejuice.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much for your kind feedback, Michelle.
I've never heard the song, tbh, but those lines reminded me of that scene *sigh*

[pam81.livejournal.com]

*sigh* Painful but really beautiful!

[guavejuice.livejournal.com]

Thank you so muchfor your feedback, hon. You know I always appreciate it :)
*hugs you tight*