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Author:[livejournal.com profile] guavejuice
Pairing:Brian/Justin
Timeline:220
Justin's POV
A/N:Unbeta'd
Disclaimer:I own nothing
Comments are love



Now there's no point in placing the blame
And you should know I suffer the same
If I lose you
My heart will be broken

Madona


I could have gone to Daphne's or stayed at Debbie's until I figured out what to do, but my legs carried me to the loft.
I still had the keys.

I didn't expect to see him there. I thought he would be at Babylon fucking around. I heard him breathing in the dark but I knew he wasn't sleeping.

I wasn't even thinking when I took off my t shirt and pants and climbed into bed with him.

I felt his warm torso pressing into my back as his arms wrapped around me. I couldn't bring myself to turn around and look at his face but I couldn't keep myself away from his embrace.

I closed my eyes.

I wanted to let him know there's no point in placing the blame on either of us and that I suffer just as much as he does.

I wanted to let him know that If I lost him my heart will be broken.

I wanted to tell him he should let the hurt inside of him die and give himself to me so we'll never be apart.

His heart was still frozen. It wasn't the right time.

Date: 2012-03-05 07:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] soulmatejunkee.livejournal.com
This is sad :(
For what I can say, it's one of the best little fics I've ever read from you V. Especially the last line.

Wonderful done. *hugs*

Date: 2012-03-05 08:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] guavejuice.livejournal.com
aww *sniff*
Thank you so much for your kind feedback, Steffi. It means a lot to me, you know that.
*Hugs you back*

Date: 2012-03-05 08:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] soulmatejunkee.livejournal.com
And you deserved every single word. ♥

Date: 2012-03-05 08:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] guavejuice.livejournal.com
awww...
*hugs*

Date: 2012-03-05 07:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yvonnereid.livejournal.com
Aww,thats so sad Vered. At least I know my heart isn't frozen...it's breaking here lol

I love this :)

Huge Hugs,Vonnie xoxox

Date: 2012-03-05 08:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] guavejuice.livejournal.com
Thank you so much for your honest feedback, sweetie. I'm so pleased to know you liked it. It means a lot
*Hugs you back*

Date: 2012-03-05 08:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] britinmanor.livejournal.com
Oh V! You've left me choked-up, and a tear sliding down my cheek...

Huge Hugs,
Cathy

Date: 2012-03-05 08:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] guavejuice.livejournal.com
Thank you so much, Cathy. I really appreciate your kind feedback
*hugs you back*

Date: 2012-03-05 08:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] minajuy.livejournal.com
even if Brians heart was frozen he did not push Justin away, so I imagine some thawing went on later

Date: 2012-03-05 09:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] guavejuice.livejournal.com
awww... the thawing of his frozen heart *sigh*
Thank you so much for reading and commenting.

Date: 2012-03-05 09:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rainbow1907.livejournal.com
Breaks my heart but so beautifully written! Love it ♥ Thank you very much and hugs, REna :)

Date: 2012-03-05 09:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] guavejuice.livejournal.com
Thank you so much for your kind feedback, Rena.I really appreciate it.
*Hugs you back*

Date: 2012-03-05 10:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pam81.livejournal.com
*sigh*
Sad but really beautiful V!
You did a great job with this piece.
Thank you ♥ *mwah*

Date: 2012-03-06 04:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] guavejuice.livejournal.com
Thank you so much for your kind feedback, sweetie.
I'm so glad to know you liked it. It means a lot to me
*Hugs you tight*

Date: 2012-03-05 10:39 pm (UTC)

Date: 2012-03-06 04:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] guavejuice.livejournal.com
Thank you for reading and commenting.

Date: 2012-03-05 11:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] briansbottom.livejournal.com
Nice use of the song lyrics. :)

Date: 2012-03-06 04:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] guavejuice.livejournal.com
Thank you so much for your comment. I heard that song yesterday morning on my way to work, and since I rewatched 219 and 220 recently I felt I needed to do something with it.

Date: 2012-03-06 12:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonbrightnites.livejournal.com
Awwww *sniffles*
You did a lovely job with this one!
But so sad.

Michelle

Date: 2012-03-06 04:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] guavejuice.livejournal.com
Thank you so much for your kind feedback, Michelle. I haven't watched that arc in a very long time because it's really so sad, but It felt right this time.
*hugs*

Date: 2012-03-06 01:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spike7451.livejournal.com
So sad, but so well done, really loed this.

Date: 2012-03-06 02:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] guavejuice.livejournal.com
Thank you so much for your feedback, Lyn. It means a lot to me *hugs*

Date: 2012-03-06 05:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] meggi63.livejournal.com
*sighs deep and wipes tears away*
So sad but so true, it wasn't the right time!
Thanks for sharing!

Date: 2012-03-06 05:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] guavejuice.livejournal.com
It was such a sad moment for them.
Thank you so much for your comment.

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