Waiting For You - a B/J Haiku

[guavejuice]

Yup, I'm definitely digging this Haiku thing. It's like a one liner, with a twist, and it's another great creative outlet for me.
This one is for my darling Miriam mimi_oly I love you gurl!

A/N: I'm not sure I'm doing it right, it's my first one ;)
It is B/J related, but the subject matter is universal.

Once again thank you sooo much, my darling Carmen galehot for yet another inspiring icon.


Autumn winds
may bring change
I'm still waiting
for
you

Comments

[jinkibumiminho.livejournal.com]

This is lovely! You captured the melancholy mood of the season so nicely. I was taught that a haiku has three lines, with 5 syllables in the first, 7 syllables in the second, and 5 syllables in the third, but the fact that you included a seasonal reference (a classic feature of haiku) is wonderful!

[guavejuice.livejournal.com]

glad you liked it, sweetie.
thank you so much for the tip. I'll definitely use it.
hugs
V.