This was fun! i like how you brought in that line from waaaay back about the beemer!

I hope I'm not stepping on your toes, but I just want to point out a couple of typos (because if I had some i'd hope people would point them out to me):
1. apporching the car. should be approaching
2. arrens to run = errands
3. noded towards Justin = nodded

And lastly, you should totally join up to Drabylon, the more the merrier...it's open to everyone! and if you edit this to an even hundred amount (like 400 or 500) you might even be able to post this there, as the prompt is open til wednesday.